the soundwaves take a break

the sky at nighttime 

does this thing

that even

the clouds don't understand

the fish swim unaware

of water

madmen

breathe the same air as 

you and me

and everyday

the sun

the moon

and the earth

nighttime day and spin

without even

knowing it

Reviews

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. hell yeah ! ... i totally agree with you ... and you said it brilliantly ... most of us don't know what we're doing ... and then we feel compelled to compel others into not knowing ... this universe is in need of serious repairs ... and i respect poets like you tremendously ... because you're not just a poet ... but a technician who is trying to repair the universe ... plus ... you always inspire me to be a technician too ...

[em]

- boy do i agree with serah - you ARE a technician - and what a splendid one at that - i'd outsource my universe repairs to you - if we didn't dwell in this poetic universe together - far away - but together - :)

winds in denial
sunlight in a queer darkness
what's the moon to do?

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

reflexive creation in action~ humbling for the soul, your poetic~like a mobile of thoughts spinning above the dreamer's third eye~

[Robin]

an atmosphere of relativity ..

[Lilly Negoi]

love "the fish swim unaware/ of water". i agree with serah, there are indeed lots of things that happen due to sheer inertia, simply because it feels natural :).