i sky

i sky like the ground

i sweat like the sun

everywhere infinity is just

another one

all these years 

alone at sea

madness is a wave

overcoming me

Reviews

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. overwhelming, paul ... remarkably stunning and profound ... it's like walking into the sea in the middle of the night ... and not caring even for a fleeting moment about the consequences because nothing worse can happen ... the title is outstanding and the opening line takes my breath away ... but it's the last four lines that transcend profundity ... and speak of an existence ... that is beyond the threshold of isolation ... vandalized beyond even a desire for redemption ... absolutely ravishing poetry, coach ... you are a genius like no other ... but more than that ... you are a human like no other ... you're the best, coach ...

[Wondering Mind]

I already know you've erased that imaginary thin line between genius and not.

[TAO]

the madness is always welcome. nicely worded, well done.