untitiled

sky's hide

infinities

infinities gamble

in space

every dream comes true

except me 

and you

Reviews

[.]

. ahhhhh ... beautiful ... even in the sky of infinite possibilities ... when every dream comes true ... we don't ... if only infinities did not gamble in space ... ahhhh ... such a brilliant line ... it's like saying life is nothing but a game of poker with the universe ... your poems are so powerful ... and they have so much depth ... how i wish our dreams came true ... just like every dream ... maybe one day we'll find happiness ... maybe ... another masterpiece paul ... and you are the master of brevity ... you say so much ... in such few words ... unbelievable ... but true ...

[Isolophobe]

You know, this made me laugh too. Reminds me of that Dylan song, "It Takes a Lot to Laugh, It Takes a Train to Cry". And there is a lot of f*****g truth to this. Strange I just finished reading The Sheltering Sky which basically says a few things along the lines of what has been said here, but without the brevity and relatability.

[em]

wow - 'infinites gamble' - is indeed - the phrase of the century - i don't know anyone - who could read this brilliant poem - and forget that phrase - even for a minute - your words are spectacular - inspirational - surreal - brilliant - and always unique - the brevity is compelling beyond measure - the sheer layers you wrap in such few words - they're endless!!!
- it is in space
that you and i float unnamed
space doesn't care eh! -

[David W Moore III]

Very well done in an efficiency of words
you have painted a mural to covercity
blocks. Gorgeous.

[.]

. i just had to return to say "infinities gamble in space" is utter genius ... the thought and the line are buzzing in my head since i read ... and am wondering and wondering and wondering ...

[Wondering Mind]

this may lead to an all night dialect.

[TAO]

...I both like this poem and hate it, only because it's true.