leftover madness

leftover madness

A Poem by paul

fear when
there should be none

madness as an art form.


there's hunger in the street
the wind knows

there's madness in the street leftover
from years 
ago

© 2010 paul


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For some reason the song The Streets of Laredo started playing in my head as I read this....I picture the streets of a bustling town in the old west feeling this way at times, as well as one of those nights that you go out drinking and there is just that something extra in the damp night air that pushes people to do things out of the ordinary, a real life werewolf encounter of sorts. Nice stuff.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. another perfect little powm from your quiver full of arrows ... it chills the spine and freezes my bone marrow ... you're right ... no reason for fright ... yet it's there ... in the stranger's stare ... madness is an art ... not a dart ... and hunger in the street is causing all the heat ... and the leftovers ... hover ... the world has reached a deadend ... yet it can't comprehend ... and you're not just the god of poetry ... you're the greek god of pro fun dity ... read i cu louso ly brillianto ... writo more ... pronto ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For some reason the song The Streets of Laredo started playing in my head as I read this....I picture the streets of a bustling town in the old west feeling this way at times, as well as one of those nights that you go out drinking and there is just that something extra in the damp night air that pushes people to do things out of the ordinary, a real life werewolf encounter of sorts. Nice stuff.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this one! I can identify with it better. You probably should title it. I'm not sure if I got exactly what you meant, but to me it reflects our economy in the U.S. lol.. weird I know....

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh yes, it seems the lately, we're madly running around for the leftovers.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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