now - or - not now

I used to fight suns

for parking space

now 

I wait in line.

out of food but not 

out of hunger

out of medicine

but not out of madness

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I'm noticing in your writes there is a subtle dual fold current that penetrates the intellectual core of spirit and the spiritual core of psyche with every day occurences that take on extraordinary affecting layers through the use of language and word placement~

I personally prefer starved and insane heyoka to gorged and numbed~ there is a sacredness somehwhere in that~ not the every day contrived holy~ but the deep primal motions of breath~ your poem brings that interior beauty in all its surreal shapes through with insightful care~

fantastic~

[Wondering Mind]

Both fit as titles to this profound write..I wonder if "profound" actually originated when a pro found something and someone reported it....

[Isolophobe]

your poems usually leave me with a bitter smile. this is no different, and the bitterness sure as hell is no different or less.