desperation is my calling card

I talk to dreams

you'd talk to anything

when it's been this long

you'd beg the sun for an ear 

to bend

you'd chase the wind

to cliff's edge

just for someone to catch

your soundwave

desperation is my calling card

Reviews

[nono]

I like this. It makes me a little sad to think that you have to be depressed to have a calling, but life works in the weirdest ways. Nice job!

[luciddreamer]

Oh this one speaks loads to me.........great write :)
Peace
robin

[Robin]

one of your best ..

[Elizabeth]

Ah... I feel like I know this place very well. I love that the first and last lines fit so well together. They could stand on their own. That's truly the sign of great work.... the circle was completed, you know?

[emmah]

i called out to a lashing rain this afternoon - and it just lashed and lashed - for hours it poured - making garbled noises against my window - while i was calling out to the rain - who knows whom it was calling out to!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

'you had been talking to anything when it's been this long'..your words always resonate of a lonely angst yet in a very gentle way.I know how this feels..always thank you for your words which just float across the vast sky...they have such magnitude.

[Emily B]

my dreams have been time travelling lately, I'm trying to pay attention to the lessons . . . I'm so far beyond desperation, it's just there's things I need to learn

[Miss Coral]

This was a wonderful piece... very simple stated, interesting and concise. Love the wording and last line. Great write altogether.

-Coral-

[...]

. it's good to talk to dreams ... they're the best companions ... as for the desperation ... i am grateful that i can feel it ... at least i'm still human ... and not gone cold like a corpse ... and at least not a living corpse ...

[Ed Hart]

sometimes a person picks up something in life, and there's no place to put it down, it seems