soon

soon

A Poem by paul

the wind dying soon lonely
like the night
for the moon
the night for the moon lonely
the wind dying soon.

© 2010 paul


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. your words are so moving ... and yet so beautiful ... they play like a song ... and consume the soul ... loneliness is haunting ... it takes over ... possesses ... the wind must be grateful ... for the leaves that fly with it sometimes ... but when that happens ... the trees get lonely without the leaves ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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...
. your words are so moving ... and yet so beautiful ... they play like a song ... and consume the soul ... loneliness is haunting ... it takes over ... possesses ... the wind must be grateful ... for the leaves that fly with it sometimes ... but when that happens ... the trees get lonely without the leaves ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So much sadness and desperation your words reveal, but the wind never stops blowing, we just sometimes don't feel it, and also sometimes it heralds a mighty storm.
Few words only with a hugh impact. Very well done!

Great title btw

Posted 14 Years Ago


such an interesting series ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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