the wind is a reminder

the wind is a reminder

of time

and dreams come

the wind is a reminder

like the sea and the sun

the sea and the sun remind  

me not to go

the sea and the sun remind

like june in snow

june in snow

snow in june

the sea reminds me

reminds me o f you

Reviews

[...]

. oh, this is the quilt that keeps us warm ... even in june ... overwhelming, paul ... a song of the heart ... a prayer of the soul ... a plea to the universe ... a poignant knock on the doors of time ... ravishing verse ... it's an aching echo and an echoing ache ... beautiful ... just beautiful ...

[...]

you hated my love for coffee
like a jealous paramour
and now you've gone, and
coffee's not coffee anymore

it only reminds me of how
you hated it every day
and now no whiff now
my coffee has nothing to say

[Wondering Mind]

The Wind is a wonderful subject to ponder on and you have whistled it here wonderfully.

[emmah]

"the sea and the sun remind
me not to go"

genius - in those lines - in all the lines, in fact - in the lucidity of your words and the complexity of the theme - genius! - and those last two lines - they scream a silence - they silence a scream - blown away!!!

[Crinkle°]

wind, sky, sea... elements are still good subjects and cool that you play with them. I enjoy very much.

[Emily B]

the wind reminds me of many things, depending on how fierce it blows or doesn't blow

stunning words

[Angel Bird]

- the wind is a reminder
- of time

- the sea reminds me
- reminds me of you

A beauty filled poem.

[Cynthia]

Wow!
Nice poem....
Wimd reminds us...
that's reminds me lots and lots of things...
Beautiful!!!