titles are stupid...

love in the street

madness in the air

everywhere he goes

people stare

the stare at his madness

they stare at his day

they stare at his madness

until the moon

goes away

they stare at his madness

like the night fights

the day

they stare at his madness

until he goes away

the flowers fight gravity

the birds fly away

the flowers fight gravity

like the night fights the day

alone in the nighttime

alone in the day

flowers fight gravity

birds fly away

Reviews

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. wow paul ... this is beyond the genius of the best simon and garfunkel song that i have heard ... and i've heard almost all ... you give new meaning to gravity ... to nature ... to life ... and to existence ... you weave into the pain of isolation ... the magic of beautiful images and metaphors ... there is a sublime hue in these flowers and birds ... nights and days ... and they're yours ... you own them ... for the depth that you bring into my universe ... i am indebted ... for the excellence of words you bring into my universe ... i am indebted beyond measure ... it's amazing to learn from you ... and i never thought that a poem called "titled are stupid" could be so amazing that it's worthy of a resounding applause ...