insert title here

buildings stand

against the sky

people with love

walk by

walk by like night

walk by like day

love walks slowly

slowly away

Reviews

[afifa malik]

i just Luv 'love walks slowly slowly away' ..........way f xpression marvellous ..... truly said dt beauty lies in simplicity !!!! :-)

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Like this, particularly the simplicity. =]

[...]

. oh, this is so beautiful ... you are brilliant ... and so ... one day ... love will pause ... and slowly open its eyes ... and be more than ecstatic ... to find you waiting ... those last two lines are to die for ... emmah is right ... unforgettable ...

[emmah]

ah - this is like sunshine and shade - only if i look carefully - am i likely to find - the line that divides the two - that one moment when the day tips over and turns into the night - that one moment is elusive - but i know - that if i ever catch it - it will be exquisite - just like this poem - and just like the sound of the footsteps - of the love walking slowly away - it can never be forgotten!

[Emily B]

this is a big little poem

still lonely, but tall as those buildings

[Angel Bird]

I'd insert the title: walkingleaves - or - at walking pace...

Sometimes it doesn't need many words to say so much. Thought provoking words.
Great job.