wind ? rhymes 4

one two three

its impossible to me

impossible as a tree

why the empty sky

one great big lie

oh why

the sky is a lie

behind the empty shore

door after door

the night behind the day

one two three

time is not for free

time and the sun

the sun 

is on the run

running just for fun

the sun has won

one two four 

its madness i adore

one two four

Reviews

[...]

. on a count of ten ... and i don't know when ... you unleash a madness ... born in a sadness ... with unnumbered days interspersed with countless nights ... with only darkness lighting up street lights ... in a universe where the sun is on the run ... for good old sadistic fun ... i'm ripped by the profundity of your words ... gosh, i've got to stop reading those nerds ... for this is sheer poetry ... trapped in the winds and yet flowing so free ... totally intricate work, paul ...

[emmah]

- two 'wows' to begin with - one for this masterpiece - and one for the genius review from serah - exemplary eloquence here - i'm bazooka'd -

one two four
one to four
one too sore

i'm gone.

[Emily B]

much madness is divinest sense
to a discerning eye
--Dickinson