wind rhymes 3

open every seed

cultivate every weed

weed and seed

in the empty mind

a glowing jewel you will find

mind and find.

in the empty lot

the wind has one last shot

to wind it's way

home

Reviews

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. halle-friekin'-lujah! ... this ode to weed ... is what i need ... on my way to amsterdam ... where i can be and i am ... there is such a prankster-ish hue to home ... to knowing ... what there is to know ... and knowing that some things shall always be unknown ... your collection of glowing jewels is sparkling ... oh, the comfort of these words ... the knowledge of knowledge ... the last shots ... and the pot shots ... amazing, paul ...

[Brad]

ooo, nice play on words from wind to wynd...badda bing

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

in the empty mind a glowing jewel you will find..
empty is only seemingly empty,there is much in the nothingness that is if we chose to see.

[emmah]

'the wind has one last shot'
and in it -
in that last shot
it winds up
in the magical land
of 'emptiness and harmony'
miles from home,
and yet
never as close
as it has been.

'emptiness and harmony' from simon and garfunkel' - and the rest from you - i hope you know - this one transcends time and reality - and it thrives - in timelessness and wizardry - like never before!!!!

[Emily B]

that trickster muse of yours really hit gold with this one

[Robin]

thought provoking series