wind rhymes 2

madness I adore

waves impossible 

to the shore

waves and madness

everything is down

trees bowing to the ground

everything is down

open is now closed

impossible as a rose

impossible and closed

madness creeping in

impossible to win

madness is winning

open every door

a whole world to explore

but madness is what 

I adore

Reviews

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. perhaps madness is all we can adore ... and what an adorable madness it is ... that sings its songs ... and its songs are carried by the wind ... you own a world ... and you own its completely essence ... its core ... this is magic potion for the soul ... if poetry were cooking ... you'd be one of the world's top three chefs ... these elements that you bring into poetry ... this combination of what is quintessentially poetic and your personal milestones ... is just so absorbing and overwhelming that it's inspiring beyond measure ... cannot wait to read more of you, paul ...

[Brad]

who doesn't adore madness? if not for madness we'd all just replaying shakespeare on our notebooks

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Madness i what i adore too..

[emmah]

in my wishes
to the shooting stars
i'd wish for the unreal,
the inexplicable,
the ambitious
and the insane.

that was yesterday,
today,
i wish
for a shooting star
and fold my heart
to fit in
with the un-granted wishes
of my yesterday.


and this madness - it's not just adorable - it's infectious - and it sticks out - like sores - in the perfection of normalcy - and yet, it is - in no uncertain terms - the genius of this madness - that mitigates the immense losses - that last lifetimes - you bring a world alive - and that world - is complete in its essence - bustling with a rarity of thought and expression - that is nothing short of insanity - in this perfection of normalcy - and all i can say is - bravo!!

[Robin]

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