ummm???

times' open mouth

the wind out

and about

time and the wind

everything is wrong

the wind sings a fatal song

everything 

is wrong

time is a disease

the wind is in the trees

time

and the wind

once upon a time

wind blowing through my mind

wind 

and time

ocean breezes blow

himalayan snow

ocean's and snow

once upon a time

I planned the perfect crime

time 

and crime

Reviews

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. a brilliant journey, paul ... and these words are a sonata ... not for the faint-hearted ... but i just haven't read something so sublime ... that intricately weaves existence with the passage of time ... and i have always been mesmerized by your sense of the universe ... but here ... in this poem ... with the wind and the ocean and the himalayas and snow ... you shatter glass ... and that one line ... "the wind sings a fatal song" ... is something i couldn't come up with in a million lives ... outstanding work with words, paul ... utterly inspiring ...

[emmah]

once upon a time
there was a song
unheard of
and a vision unseen;
a dynasty of sights
and a kingdom of sounds
that was ruled
by the gray of
your black and my white,
or maybe,
the inverse.

once upon a time
i believed.

and if there was any more to say, paul - i would've - but i have no words - and no parallel - for this voyage - none for this journey that my vocabulary can conjure - and so i let it be - knowing that you'll hear - what i can't find words to say!

[Crinkle°]

I like the repetition of some words while and yet you progress in your poetry.