untitiled

there's so much love down here

that the wind wonders where

it all comes from

the wind wonders

and the day

nighttimes

madness fills the air

like a skyhigh hope

laid bare

Reviews

[emmah]

the light just drew a rainbow
with barren colors
from a numb palette

like a dream
exposed in reality

- you're magic, paul - what a piece this is!!! - and the title- untititled - whoa - is that titillating or what!!! magic - you!!!

[Emily B]

there's a road I like to take up a hill . . . and driving up is nice . . . but driving down brings me so much joy . . . as near as I ever get to flying

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. how do you always write such immensely surreal poetry ... from the first line ... till the end ... you linger in a moment ... and you own it ... "like a skyhigh hope laid bare"? ... it's soul-scorching poetry ... and so magical ... and lucid and lucent ... in a very ravishing way ... your sadness is sublime ...