over and over

over and over

A Poem by paul

over and over again
i choose madness

over sunshine
rain 
birds
pigeons
rats

I choose madness:

hunger like the waves
for the seashore

a prisoner
for free air

I choose madness
as it chooses me

© 2010 paul


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we choose the way we do, oddly enough, because it makes us feel alive

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. true that! ... it's yours for keeps ... your madness makes you write some breathtakingly beautiful poetry ... may it remain ... and thrive ... like it does ... the last four lines are out of this world insane ... and inspirational ... and i agree with emms ... it's a divine madness ... and we know who would happily ratify that ... :) ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I choose madness just as i chose melancholy..there is much art in madness ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


you choose madness, which sounds like a wonderful adventure, I'm apparently just nuts ;)



Posted 14 Years Ago


you choose
the darkness over dawn
crepe over color
rains over rainbows

and you subsist
in your blue blanket
being irreversibly
you!

you redefine and refine the divine!!!! these are choices - that talk - and yes - madness is relative - its sanity in the insanity of this world - that's madness - and you - well, maybe it's mad - but i think - mad is great!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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theres a fine line between madness and genius..are you the latter? You'd be mad not to think so ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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madness is so tempting sometimes...

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