sometimes

sometimes i go mad for days on end.

sometimes it's just for hours

like the rain

sometimes the whipping

wind

blows so hard 

that

the sun just sits

and stares

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

like the rain

sometimes, it is what it is, no?

as always, the cadence is dead on. I have been here. In fact, I think I might live here.

[emmah]

this wind - when it blows a speck of dust into your eyes, don't you just hate that - even if its star dust?? i don't blame the sun for sitting and staring - the wind just has the kind of dance that's impossible to take eyes off! but sometimes, only sometimes, the sun stops staring and joins in - magical - your poetry - magical - that moment!

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. don't know anyone who writes like you ... and it's all because of the "whipping wind" ... and the "staring sun" ... you write lucid and melting poetry ...

[Emily B]

beautiful madness . . . I think I wander a little close to there some days myself . . .

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Oh!Paul..i know how this feels...when the whipping wind blows so hard.I wrote something similiar..but it took me words and words to express such but you said it so well in just few words.

[Crinkle°]

beautiful. Happy that you've added another poem.