none

sorry so short. will delete soon.

to be left here alone

is the blessing and the curse

no love

but to see

what one can mold

from nothing

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

I begin to see some small hope......this is great

vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com

[Robin]

perfect expression of a thought , great writing

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

incredible paul.. wonderful gem

[Isolophobe]

F*****g a, I know this feeling all to well also. let us hope something can be molded.

[...]

. don't even think about deleting it ... there's so much here ... words that were set ... etched ... embossed ... and they rule ... another blessing and another curse later ... there'll be lots of brick and mortar ... lots to build with ... more pieces to complete the jigsaw ... i don't know what the world's gonna say ... but i'm not giving up ... everyone does that ... i'd like to try something different ...

[emmah]

its the moments between the moments - the rare seconds - when poetry is born in its purest form - after that, it's all just vocabulary arbitrage - and what a moment you've had!!! it'd be a shame to see this gone from the cafe - but i wonder how you'd delete from the readers' consciousness!

[Ed Hart]

it may feel like a curse, but it's a blessing from one end to the other

[Emily B]

why should it go away?

the little moments in between are just as important as the larger works

[.]

why delete? when it's so sweet!:)