again
A Poem by
paul
toooo short, waiting.
ah, alone again
waiting for the wind
to return the muse
from the future
where she improves upon
the past
© 2010 paul
Reviews
very nice piece!
Posted 14 Years Ago
who are you really? I find myself asking the same question again and again.
Posted 14 Years Ago
who are you really? I find myself asking the same question again and again.
it had to be a clever muse - funny i didn't figure she fixes pasts in futures - while here you are - etching futures out of the past!!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
it had to be a clever muse - funny i didn't figure she fixes pasts in futures - while here you are - etching futures out of the past!!!!
Holy moley, is it you?
Posted 14 Years Ago
Holy moley, is it you?
yes, makes me think, once you fallow the poem and get the realization you are giving in the poem. "The future where she improves upon the past" some good words, and very true. thanks raining
Posted 14 Years Ago
yes, makes me think, once you fallow the poem and get the realization you are giving in the poem. "The future where she improves upon the past" some good words, and very true. thanks raining
It is short but it is brilliant :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
It is short but it is brilliant :)
. the muse has challenging tasks ... she has to factor in everything ... everything's that's happened in the past and everything that might happen in the future ... i have no doubt that your patience shall pay ... :) ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
. the muse has challenging tasks ... she has to factor in everything ... everything's that's happened in the past and everything that might happen in the future ... i have no doubt that your patience shall pay ... :) ...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
who is she?
nice
Posted 14 Years Ago
who is she?
nice
your trickster muse must be smiling
Posted 14 Years Ago
your trickster muse must be smiling
yes
Posted 14 Years Ago
yes
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