strange

how strange to think

that there are angels waiting

in that heaven

and to think

the rain will stop

one storm followed by another

and to think

that my skin

is the only thing

separating me from

mass infinity

Reviews

[Dalebear]

I like this poem it seems nice but different, good write.

[alan peter kelly]

yes...the dreaded infinity...the party to which I am not invited...quite sad really...too bad vampires are as fictional as God...a strong write...tight...

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. there'll be times when the rain doesn't stop ... and there'll be times when you need a second skin ... that's the bad part ... the good part is ... as long as you let these words flow ... we'll be waiting in the wings ... ha! ... i feel like i'm at an airport ... you're flying in and out ... and i'm a part of the ground crew ... so fun ... :) ...

[Emily B]

seems to me you've got a whole lot to say, and you say it so well . . .

[Ed Hart]

i think the 'mass infinity' is in there with you, but what do i know...as for 'one storm following another', you need to get a new weatherman...on top of all this, i like the way you say it

[emmah]

ah! and how strange that the strange stuff is often so true! you capture such profundity in such magnificent brevity! there is a universe unexplored, and yet, there are thoughts flung out there that resound! and someone's got to be listening!