to see the sunrise

to see the sunrise once.

in your life

and to just glimpse

the trailing end

of the muse

to be a wild animal.

hunted by the sun.

to stand on your hind legs

in defiance.

to see the sunrise once in your life

is much better

than too have never seen it at all.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This is a wonderful in spiritual poem about the sunrise, I like sunrise with all them warm colours.

Good write, keep up writing

Dalebear

[JC]

you have this way of writing, like you are jotting down notes, thoughts, as you are there in the experiance, and then walking away onto the next with a zen like mind.

[Emily B]

a little cliche, maybe, but still true

I like that line

"to just glimpse
the trailing end"

that one glimpse could make all the difference

[paul]

the ending sucks