words like tears

hey emily.... youre right... sometimes (first time for me)... the title comes before the poem. uh oh... but now i forgot the title... and the poem

words like f*****g tears

words like raindrops.

this f*****g heaven is the worst thing to happen to me

down in the hole

madness ruled

and there was no.

it didn t matter

in the hole

time and space were beaten...

animals don t care

for other planet

or the phony stars. in the sky

Never trust anyone is the cardinal rule.

The sun is a charade.

All these years driving myself crazy...

and to fall

just before

the finish line.

Like words can help?

repair the years

of damage

heaven takes too much.

its much

easier

to fall.

Reviews

[em]

- ah!!!! - sublime!!!! - your words - and serah's too - i'm left speechless - and phony stars!!! - whoa whoa whoa!!!

no more now
let's pretend
to not play pretend

as if you knew
what i'd lost
you lay a sorry hand
on my stone shoulder

and pretended
i was broken

all the while
i was trying
to sew you back
together
into your abandoned sky

[.]

. ah, you are too divine ...

a fall from grace
in haste
takes nothing
but to rise
and soar
takes everything
but why
is it easier to die
and why
is it so hard to live

[Dalebear]

I agree with Emily darkness and light to make a person like a yin yang sign in a way in every good there a bit of bad and every bad there is a bit of bad. every tunnel has a light at the end of it. it how we can get there it might be along walk but we will get to it.

Dalebear

[Emily B]

it takes darkness and light to make a whole person. the trick is in the balance.