f**k

f**k

A Poem by paul
"

for all who are offended: i will soon delete.

"
the problems with words are
you can only choose
one at a time

and there really aren t that many
words really

its like choosing
the sun

© 2010 paul


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- they are really limiting - words are - and serah's right - sometimes - there's not even that one perfect word - that's the one - the one that eludes me right now - that i want to leave behind here -

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. brilliantly said ... you're right ... there's only one perfect word to be picked for one specific thing and sometimes not even that ... especially at night ... when there's no sun ... amazingly brilliant you are, coach ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


and the sun
makes proxy appearances
only to defy
the night time

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am lost ...but your unique style is interesting...poetry is art!

vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com

Posted 14 Years Ago


don't delete it, this might be my favorite

Posted 14 Years Ago



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