you ve created a monster

worse and worse. somebody stop meeeeeee! oh, and ... you wanted a title? here s your f*****g title. oh no... this is horrible, horrible writing. the words are turning on me. like the stars ... you

you ve created

a monster

it s not the years in the hole

that break you

it s that first sliver

of light

after all those

years

of darkness

(this is where the poem starts to suck)

I ts the what I ve missed

not really

madness doesn t think like that

its the why me    why me

not really 

hell is not like that

there are no words

that could ever match

the human touch

Reviews

[.]

. oh gosh ... and there are no words that could even begin to match your magic touch ... what a brilliant piece of poetry, coach ... how could i have missed it ... i am a moron ... thank god you're a genius ... and a generous one at that ... this is just amazing ... my anthem ... i love, love, love it ...

[em]

- i thought i'd lost this one - thanks to serah - i haven't - and them fking titles - boy oh boy - please convey thanks from em - to drunk - drunk seems good - :) -

[.]

. still love it ... loads and loads and loads ...

[Dalebear]

No words can match a human touch....ever....because the magic touch is magic there nothing to describe it but people can try.

Dalebear

[Wondering Mind]

lol...the comments Paul left should be a write.

[paul]

oh but... really ty...i like writing titles

[paul]

sorry i m drunk, drunk i m sorry. i wanted to half quote bradley... you wanted a title...'deal with it'.

and quote Mersault "think up your own damn title" or such... sorry Mersault