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who

who knows the sun?

the moon?

the endless sky

who

who knows what

what perfect little dance

what things to say

to get what

I want

who 

what

orchestra?

can play just the right notes

to get the attention

of the invisible

angels

who hold the keys

to love

Reviews

[emmah]

this one pulls the earth right from under one's feet - and one's left reeling - spinning spirals around love - and the keys to it - they tinkle at times though - to be uncovered in an unexpected way - an unexpected place - and this poem - well, it's the map - to the treasure hunt - not easy to decipher - but - there - loud and clear and stark - striking poem - overwhelming!!!

[em]

- there is so much - that no one knows - and yet - you know - that there are things to know - that no one knows - serah's right - just always perfect are you -

[.]

. magical to a maddening degree ... is what i want to say ... true that ... all your words in your amazing poem ... no one knows ... no one knows the right keys ... you're just always perfect, coach ...

[Dalebear]

I say that special people have a copy of the key to heart and we have the original key y out heart. This is a sackful strikeful poem.

Dalebear

[Brad]

who indeed? unanswered questions...the human condition...this is why we need a creed to follow...or religion...be it science, god, jesus, rocks, l ron hubbard...

[Alicante lullaby]

wow..that's so simple and beautiful.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

who hold the keys
to love
Indeed..who does :)

[Robin]

"that detective is the right question " ...

[Emily B]

the invisible angels are sometimes standing so near that you feel the light vibrating toward you . . .

[...]

. you know it ... and you're pushing all the right buttons ... but it was never meant to be easy ... and hence it's meant to be a surprise ... everything about love is ... this write is beautifully written ... it knocks one out ...