untitled

Nothing left

like the sun growing cold

like the end of time

a thousand lost winds

wandering

Reviews

[Dalebear]

The sun can feel sometimes it is getting cold but love can warm it up again.

Good write

[.]

nothing is left
when we're so bereft
of the sun's heat and warmth

not a care for time
or winds that chime
lost in a storm in the north

. ah ... 17 words ... that last forever ... soaked in silence ... immersed in depth and marinated in profundity ... you are the master, mister ... as em says ... and you have no competition at all ... you reign, paul ... you totally reign ...

[Alicante lullaby]

your words still have 'this thing',they dont need to be titled.its like even this guy's is and are are most significant.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I agree with Emily..your words need a name need a body cause they have so much of soul :)

[emmah]

it sinks and swims - in absolution - and yet - it is - the tiny crack in the door - that lets light through - and maybe - the sign - for the "thousand lost winds wandering" - to find their way home - whenever they're ready

[Emily B]

maybe one day when your words grow up, they will find titles?

poor, lost, lonely words without a name

[...]

. and yet time keeps passing ... it keeps traveling ... it keeps unraveling ... and then ... suddenly ... one knows ... that the breakthrough one is looking for ... is actually an artistic outburst ... brilliant work! ...