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no madness 

I have not known 

no sky unflown

madness like a burbling stream

searching searching searching

constantly running nowhere

Reviews

[.]

you know all rough edges
and all skies and their ledges
you know streams and how

you know the constants
you know the variables
you know it all somehow

where is here
and where is there
i shall never know

where is near
and where is far
i shall never go

. paul, no one can inspire anyone as much as you ... your sensitivity is so rare ... and your insights are so precious ... that there's always the solace of songs in your poems ... they're just beautiful ... and you're amazing because you write straight from your soul ... always ...

[Dalebear]

Madness can make our minds run away to never-land, but we can have a wonderful imagination.

Good write well done

[em]

now is never
madness is clever
it knows where it all ends
it knows just where the turn bends
in madness, milky moons will forever thrive
in milky moons, the search will be forever alive

[.]

there is a fine line between madness and genius...I think you are tipping to the latter..well penned

[Emily B]

Hamlet was mad by design . . . he claimed he knew the right way of things when the wind blew right

what some call madness, I might name brilliance or genius of an artistic character, I just claim foolish

[emmah]

all circles are endless - all endlessness is circular, they say - and so are all the real things - life, love, goodness, honesty - there is peace somewhere - and maybe, somewhere is nowhere!!

[...]

. it's chaotic if one falls in the trap of second-guessing oneself perpetually and endlessly ... i have known it ... even puppets have strings attached to them ...