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A Poem by paul

mad as the sun
sad is the moon

a million infinities

stretching like light


and 
so 
the games
below


madness creeping over the borders
madness seeping like sun light
around a corner

© 2010 paul


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hmmm ... thought-provoking ...the mind can be a powerful thing to provoke with feeling and thoughts.

Good write


Posted 14 Years Ago


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. "seeping like sunlight" ... and ... "around a corner" ... are sheer brilliance ... but nothing to beat " a million infinities " ... and the sun's madness ... and the moon's sadness ...

i provoke
i revoke
the game plan

i start
i end
the same plan

but i am nothing
not something or anything
but i try
because i can

Posted 14 Years Ago


there are so many almost thoughts . . . song lyrics that are just out of reach and some hazy memory of the words 'as above, so below' . . . there are just days like this

been reading today with a mind to titles and I'm not coming up with anything clever . . . there are days like that too

Posted 14 Years Ago


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. hmmm ... thought-provoking ... i wonder what the options are ... does one only get to observe or play some too? ... great write ...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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