untitiled

out on the ledge

forever fringe dwelling

daring death

evading life

out on the ledge

up on the shelf

where noone can find me

with noone looking

out on the ledge

daring madness

to play

Reviews

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. i cannot get over "forever fringe dwelling" ... what an amazing expression ... and who would dare to dare madness except the exceedingly sane and poetic and philosophical ... you're the ultimate poet, coach ...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

amazing leaps of being~ wicked good creativity at play here~

[Dalebear]

Out on the edge man lol

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. revisiting ... only to find your soul sparkle ... oh, how you bait time ... with power and panache ... and these potent baits ... succinct and succulent insanity ... but look ahead ... there, right there ... on that other ledge ... ah, i see you ...

[emmah]

out on the ledge
daring madness

to play

sitting at the edge
of the world - waiting
to fly

wow - how you mesmerize with this sparkling shadow - how you mesmerize!!! and these shadows haunt -

[Emily B]

those last three words are like lightning out of a clear blue sky . . . stunning and just really brilliant writing

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. some crazy alliteration ... but this isn't about that ... this is about facing the cliff ... like a seasoned cliff hanger ... amazing ...

[Fantasia Allmighty]

I like it. I see where it can be so much better, but I have to say it's pretty good.