untitiled

I want something that

doesn t exist

like the sun

in an ice cream cone

women might 

as well

be

a million miles away

the sun might as well

stay set

Reviews

[.]

. and no woman is chocolate enough to fit in an ice cream cone ... that's why most men are home alone ... pfft ... women, i tell ya ...

[.]

. you're right ... women are just too set in their thinking ... and that's what upsets men ...

[Dalebear]

I want a ocean in a fish tank.

[...]

. revisiting ... i'd like to apply for permanent residence in amsterdam ... and i'd like my application approved ...

[emmah]

- i want a rainbow - inside a brown box - wrapped in a coarse paper - with jute strings holding it in - i want a rainbow

[Emily B]

you boiled it down to the bare bones . . . with images that aren't trite or cliche . . . that takes tremendous skill.

[...]

. wow! ... sheer brilliance ... you own words ... startling work ... 30 words and you said so much ...

[Michael X]

powerful, well crafted emotion playing out through imagery, Wow.
great job.