drown

drown

A Poem by paul

I drown in the desert
I starve in the sea.

infinity's search
has nothing on me.

outside the world spins.

this castle
this dungeon

I hold the key .

© 2015 paul


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I have missed your work. This is that classic Paul style that I love so much. Efforless, raw, vivid. What can I say? Your work inspires.

Posted 9 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
.
~~ indeed, indeed... ~~ our dungeons may be dungeons but they belong to us... and sometimes... we can build a universe in them... one that is uniquely ours... one in which we can float or swim... ~~ your poetry is not just a universe but a planet, coach... ~~ it's reality seasoned with a dash of hope... at least for me...

Posted 9 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

312 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on September 6, 2015
Last Updated on September 6, 2015

Author

paul
paul

Writing
Christmas Christmas

A Poem by paul


CPW CPW

A Poem by paul


still still

A Poem by paul