ugh

i saw another killer 

on the street today

the sky was black

but the stars were in the way.

infinity's stalk me

like the earth is surrounded

by the sea.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

The metaphor use is awesome, you are surrounded be careful, lol
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[...]

I heard that in space you cannot see the stars, that everything is dark. Yet when I close my eyes at night I see flecks of light

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, stalked by infinity, we are surrounded by sea...and one day that is all there will be again...

the circle of human life will end in blackness...and the stars will disappear.

nice short and tight write...with a heartbeat of its own.

[paul]

great review. great writing

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Infinities stalk me..
Can I ever be completely free?

Thanks for your words.

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:: wow... life does feel as eerie as that sometimes...

:: excellent work, coach... your brilliance never ceases to amaze and inspire me...