Dear loved

Maybe the flow is not that great, but it sure comes from the heart.

There will be days
I will spend on the floor
Laying, chased instead of chase
With a mind thats sore

I do not think
I am not good enough
I do not blink
Because I do trust

I don’t want to bother
Even though you would
Happily, but I want another
Way for you to know, there should
For my demons to smother

Still happier that ever
Still going to burst
Dear loved, I want you never
To see me at my worst

Reviews

[studentinthecafe]

Really good progression through the piece!

[Patricia]

Thank you for noticing!

[Robert]

I really like the last stanza best. Overall I good free verse poem you have written Patricia.

[Patricia]

Thank you very much! The best come from the heart I guess

[hanir]

Nice write!
Keep writing!

[Patricia]

Thank you! I will