You do
A Poem by
Patricia
This is my first love poem ever I think..
Who needs sun
For the first time
I don't want to run
Who needs light
A glance in your eyes
I don't want to fight
Who needs air
I'd lose it anyways
I don't want the spare
For the first time
One does not worsen
You do make me
A better person
© 2015 Patricia
Reviews
Sweet and simple , a good write.
-Angad
Posted 9 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for that nice comment
A very clever piece. Nicely written. 😊
Posted 9 Years Ago
A very clever piece. Nicely written. 😊
9 Years Ago
Thank you my dear
9 Years Ago
You're welcome.
Would love to read more of your works.. 😊
Keep writing.
9 Years Ago
How sweet of you! I definitely will
The first one is the unforgettable one.
Posted 9 Years Ago
The first one is the unforgettable one.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, I am happy that you like it
9 Years Ago
You are welcome, dear poet.
Patricia a good rhyming poem from the heart I believe. I am pleased that you took a step forward and wrote a love poem. I like the last line "you do make me a better person" whomever can make you a better person in life is a good person themselves.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Patricia a good rhyming poem from the heart I believe. I am pleased that you took a step forward and wrote a love poem. I like the last line "you do make me a better person" whomever can make you a better person in life is a good person themselves.
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9 Years Ago
Yes it is and thank you for your lovely comment
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Patricia Germany
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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce.
It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader!
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