Undiscovered

Uncovering the mind gives the possibility of an inexistent accordance. Burn the fear with the cover, let it fit and love.

Burn my bare soul

Set it on fire

Capture the fragments  

Could one desire?

The undiscovered depth

When a total does not fit

There is no access

But how can I permit?

Burn to illuminate

Burn the depth with depth

Free to expand

Unrestrained in its full breadth

Maybe only with a burnt down cover

I am free to permit

And I will discover

Because now it is possible to fit

Reviews

[Horizons]

Hey my beautiful dear, your soft fingers made a little typo here in this line: "The undiscovered detphs", please forgive me for picking up this typo "detphs" off your poetry. You`re very close my heart so, as a dear, I take you inside my heart and show you what you even needed to be shown. Please replace it with this "Depth".

Anyway, This poetry`s one of my fav. indeed. And, I can easily see the vivid imagery of "Depth" through your words. The way you`ve started this poetry is what just touched my heart and allowed it to get you more close to it. Oh... you write so deep stuffs. Keep writing, Patricia.

[Mayank]

I found this very intriguing and powerful, there are those areas where we can reach but only stopped by beliefs and fear. Your words were very true.

[Patricia]

Thank you very much for your nice review! I am glad you could enjoy it.