Empty

Empty

A Poem by Patricia
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It's a strange time again. For everybody who doesn't know how to feel

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Empty

The flow of the unknown                                                                          

Where does it lead                                                                                

Lead by flown                                                                                        

When the known has fleed


What is left                                                                                            

When everyhing is gone                                                                              

A sudden theft                                                                  

I am so lone


The constant changed                                                                        

The colour of the water                                                                        

The constant’s new arranged                                                                    

It has now an opaque daughter

© 2014 Patricia


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Sometime we can feel and know he emptiness. Just plain tire and needing reason to keep moving. I liked how you defined the word in the poem. The closing lines I liked.
"The constant changed
The colour of the water
The constant’s new arranged
It has now an opaque daughter"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on December 21, 2014
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Tags: empty, unknown, known, left, fleed, theft, lone, alone, lonely, colour, change, constant, blue, arrangement, opaque, daughter

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Patricia
Patricia

Germany



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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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A Poem by Patricia