Empty

Empty

A Poem by Patricia
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It's a strange time again. For everybody who doesn't know how to feel

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Empty

The flow of the unknown                                                                          

Where does it lead                                                                                

Lead by flown                                                                                        

When the known has fleed


What is left                                                                                            

When everyhing is gone                                                                              

A sudden theft                                                                  

I am so lone


The constant changed                                                                        

The colour of the water                                                                        

The constant’s new arranged                                                                    

It has now an opaque daughter

© 2014 Patricia


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Sometime we can feel and know he emptiness. Just plain tire and needing reason to keep moving. I liked how you defined the word in the poem. The closing lines I liked.
"The constant changed
The colour of the water
The constant’s new arranged
It has now an opaque daughter"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 10 Years Ago


Patricia

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on December 21, 2014
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Tags: empty, unknown, known, left, fleed, theft, lone, alone, lonely, colour, change, constant, blue, arrangement, opaque, daughter

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Patricia
Patricia

Germany



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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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A Poem by Patricia