Stuck

A few things summarized I could never say, because maybe we were stuck in the wrong time

Trying is hard,

I know my dear.

But don't expect an answer, if 

 you are not willing to hear.

My words, 

aren't,

but my actions are clear.

My deeds I am willing to commit,

for you,

Is what I fear.

Sadly,

your affection is prime

Never out of line.

Never mine.

So we'll stay right here

 

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Seemed like you`ve passed through some "confusing" time that`d have brought to you by "love" ... for love. Yeah, it`s a very hard time to choose what`s right and what`s wrong for heart because, neither the heart knows what love brings nor the love knows what heart beats for. Very deep poetry!

[Patricia]

For me every day is confusing, I don't know but I think only time clears things up and I think the tricky part is that there isn't always a right or wrong. Yes who knows. Thank you again for reading and commenting:)

[Wórdsmíth]

Yes, time clears things up and it`d make things clear with "time" but, it`s all up to you how to change it and how to glow with it. In short, humans always take wrong decisions when they`re confused so, don`t get on it much. Just be remembered, if you are in love then only one thing keep in your beautiful heart and head that .. "the cost of a "diamond" can`t be judged at one sight... alias, the value of love can never be judged within the moment, it takes time--a long time to know how it makes other things bright because, the shine of diamond always make the surround glistening." All the best, Patti ;)

[Patricia]

Yes I completely agree. haha thanks, all the best for you, too john;)

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol

[Colton Warr]

This is outstanding! How you captured such powerful emotion in such a short poem is amazing! Great piece, thanks for writing!

[Patricia]

I really appreciate your review, thank you!

[Justin]

that was really great, it has alot of emotion in it and it tells a great story in short form :) :)

[Patricia]

thank you very much:)!

[Justin]

your welcome, cant wait to read your next piece of writing