Take Me For A Fool

Tell me what I want to hear
Go behind my back
F**k up
Lie
Scrape yourself clean from guilt

Feel nothing
Repeat
One more time
No matter what
Take a sip
I'll f**k up

Waves goodbye
Tears free flow
Toleration disappeared
I am done

Reviews

[Chris Lotus]

I really like this piece. Very aggressive and you seem very aware of your surroundings, in this case you know how a liar works. Excellent job!

[Orlando Murcia]

Very aggressive and angry write

but this was very well expressed

Great write

[N.E.T.]

This is a great "letting go" piece - very honest, and raw. There are some subliminal messages in here that are hard to catch - makes it evern better...

Feel nothing
Repeat
One more time
No matter what
Take a sip
I'll f**k up

Great!

[poetic soul]

Waves goodbye
Tears free flow
Toleration disappeared
I am done

damn sad! damn good!

:) smiles,
Krishna

[Tristan Noir]

im happy i make u write poems

[Art Sun]

Sometimes we can only take so much...this release of those emotions held within the mind and heart shows how one can escape that toleration...

nice...