Voyager 1

Voyager 1 Space Exploration

 

Voyager 1 where are you now
over 17 hour wait just to find out
seeing far beyond the edge of the heliosphere
discovering new space, whisper in my ear
tell your tale, a journey beyond realms
is interstellar travel possible, what do you see?
leaving home outside your solar system for me
hitting the magnetic highway
soaring through electrical particle winds for days
if you change direction I'll know you've gone
far enough to change everything we've known so long

Author's Note

if you haven't heard by now much about this then you should check out current events in space
:) awesome stuff

Reviews

[Kristallo]

This reminds me somewhat of space odyssey by Bowie... your final line was a perfect ending, whimsical in a way. The only thing that I might change is "electric" instead of "electrical" as it might even the flow a bitter better, that sentence is beautifully expressed, just a bit wordy. This is a keen insight to our space endeavors, written from a heart that beats in harmonious sync with the universe. Well done!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect!

[patrick hamilton]

thanks man...