what do you think?

what do you think?

A Story by Patrick Hengsbach
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well...what do you think?

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what do you think?

 what do you think love is? do you think it is when you look at him/her and your heart drops? Do you think that it is when you cant speak to him/her? well if that is what you think love is them by all means keep thinking that way, im not saying that that is the wrong way but that is not the way that i think.

I think that you know you love that person when you get to know them. you cant just fall in love with someone at first sit because the only aspect that u are looking at is the outside and you know nothing about the inside. you have to get to know that person to really know who they are.

when you get to know that person more then i think you will have a wider aspect on what they are really like. you see love is not when you see him/her walking down the street or the hallway and you stare at them, love is that special feeling you get when you are around them. you feel like your floating.

when you love someone you would do anything for that person. love isnt just love, it is way more complicated than that, it is impossible to describe, but i am trying my best to give you a sight on what it entails.

love is when you cant stop thinking about them. you think about them every second of everyday. every time you see them you get this feeling in your stomach that twists it in many different ways and motions, but it is not a bad feeling, it is probably the greatest feeling you will ever come across, well besides a child. love is when you know you ave that connection with that person, you always laugh and have a good time together and of course there are going to be arguments but if you do love eachother then you WILL get through it.

love can come about in many ways, but you cant just love someone by looking at them. get th know them personally and then if you feel a connection with that person then you know you have something going for yourself.

oh i almost forgot... treat that person with respect, love, care, trust, comfort, and let them know in their heart that you will always be there for them no matter what, that you will always be there to comfort them when they arnt in a good mood, and never cheat them, cherish every moment you have with them!!

© 2010 Patrick Hengsbach


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this is so true.
(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


I couldn't agree with you more on this.
Mostly with the whole, love isn't just by looking on the outside, what inside matters too. It makes a lot of sense to people, it speaks out, I know I have had all those feelings when I realized I loved someone.
This was really good, a very enjoyable read. You should continue on writing, you have a talent in it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Impressive for your first write bro. You say it like you feel it, and I respect that.

I do think you have some room for improvement grammar wise, however you do have a strong, obvious writing talent that I'd enjoy seeing more of.

Peace out!

Posted 14 Years Ago


All of what you wrote was very honest and very true, and I agree with everything that you said. Good job, dear. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I dunno anything you feel like writing. Nobody can tell you what to write. You just end up coming up with it yourself after giving it some thought.

Posted 14 Years Ago


what do you want me to write about next ??

Posted 14 Years Ago


You're very welcome. Hope to see more from you soon. :P

Posted 14 Years Ago


its a joke haha!! but thank you for liking what i wrote!

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol you weirdo how is it dramatic?xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol now i am starting to cry lol!! this is so dramatic haha!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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