The Richer Gifts

The Richer Gifts

A Poem by Sagar Patil
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Its about Human Mind.

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Man! have  you ever yearned to be the wind
That helps the moon lift ocean waves ashore,
Outruns birds, leaves the fastest steeds behind,
And ferries monsoons, sound, and much, much more?

Or longed to be a ray of stellar light,
And sail to Earth from galaxies as far
As brinks of space-time, reach a toddler's sight,
To awe him with the glimmer of your star?

Or the void filling this expanding cosmos,
Heedless of every strife and glee within?
Like nothingness has been forever paused
To teach all repose, by that Being unseen?

Although such wealth you might have never sought,
Your Mind's a queen with richer gifts of thought.




© 2010 Sagar Patil


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IT IS A FALLACY OF THE MIND HERE IN MY COUNTRY ANYWAY .that IS THE THOUGHT THAT ONE CANT CONTEMPLATE THE WONDERS OF THE UNIVERSE WITHOUT SHAKING OFF THE PREMISE OF GOD AND THE ROMANTICS OF THIS WORLD,bUT TO ME the world is many things the universe too big to contemplate You show me the universe has a romance to its creation and existence .It tickles the mind excites the heart

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Sagar Patil
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Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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