First Time

First Time

A Poem by True Awakening
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a piece about sex for the first time from a girls perspective. i follow a 2,5,7,5,2 sylable scheme. and is designed to show thoughts so it uses not many words because they are quite busy LOL.

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       Love.                    Tense.

   Pain. Arched.      Smooth. Pleasure.

Blue eyed Lover.Amazing

insecurities.

removed

© 2010 True Awakening


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i love this. Simple but deep. :) stunning.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 11, 2010
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True Awakening
True Awakening

peterborough, england, United Kingdom



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i love reading usually teenage books but was annoyed most came in the format from a womans point of view so dicided i will write my own books more..

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