scarlet dream

first Hiaku thought i'd try lol

 

 

princess, cream skin.

taste and touch, desires call.

scarlet dream love.

 

 

Reviews

[True Awakening]

ethan the whole thing is metaphorical; it's actually is talking about the girl you love not a litteral princess but thank you

[Not A Writer]

Good job in showing what a princess does and is. Good description and good haiku.

[Jessica]

Oh tthis is that hiaku you told me about.......
its really really good connor.......i love it