purity of life

Life is pure
why do we feel the need to mask the beauty -
with stress and worries
keep it pure and simple just like -
mother nature has intended
let your inner owl's wisdom guide you
let your inner wolf defend you

Don't let your broken past -
be the enemy that stands before you
don't allow those demons rule your mind
free yourself from modern life demands
follow your soul
as path is set out for you to explore,
don't close the book when you read a bad chapter -
just turn the page over to -
discover not everything is what it seems.

Mend the broken heart
don't allow to break your spirit
as you may not see it
But life haven’t revealed all of his cards yet
Have patience child as you will see
nothing last forever -
suffering nor happiness
Life are like seasons of the year
cold and miserable want them to go away
another you don’t mind they do no harm
and sometimes you wish they would stay forever

Life is like a rollercoaster
just close your eyes, experiences the crazy turns
before you know it, the ride is over
for good.

Reviews

[Jamie Cook]

Phew! that was an awesome poem! :D I think me inner owl is napping, and me wolf snacking...explains alot :P lol but no seriously this was really great, i loved it ^^

[Zahra]

Nice write, nice message. Good job.

[Alina-Sofia]

nice

[vspjaguar]

very nice! A poem about how we can beautify our lives. I loved it :)

[T. Val]

Excellent piece you have here. It conveys a positive and hopefully message. "Don't close the book when you read a bad chapter." Best line. Great work

[quinfinn]

this is intensely realistic and very beautiful wisdom. i love when people embrace this side of our natures. you have endeared yourself to me with glowing poetry but this sets the bar even higher. well written and beautifully thought out.

[lee von cleef]

Owls have big eyes, little brains, but like mom said "it is not what you have ,but what you do with what you have that counts" and like the "little red engine "I think I can, I think I can , I think I can" this is the spirit!

[Nick.B]

We lost that touch with nature and with our inner self, the modern society keeps making us problems....anyway great write love it

[sithlordjp]

"why do we feel the need to mask the beauty - / with stress and worries" Oh, so true... Strong writind, and a powerful structure. Love the last stanza, it's the perfect ending with this piece, well done!

[Jesse Jacques]

very true. great job!