hurt mind

The coldest people are some of the happiest people
Words are cheap silence is powerful
Never underestimate thinking mind as
Is one of the deadliest weapon you can come across
Tears are fake but eyes tell the truth
Don't hurt a silent mind as you don't plan your murder out loud
Love and hate two strongest words that lay on your tongue
Don't disvalue their worth
use them wisely as they can turn against you
The most valuable treasure lay deep within dirt
When you see hurt and destroyed eyes
Those eyes understand the true meaning of life
Don't mistake real eyes with glass eyes

Reviews

[Savior of Time]

"Don't mistake real eyes with glass eyes" That's amazing. This poem is really good; definitely makes you think twice. Lovely.

[patti]

thanks, that what my aim was with this poem was to make people think twice about life

[Savior of Time]

well, you most definitely made me ponder.

[quinfinn]

this is disturbing, but only because it yields such deep truths as to be profoundly beautiful. patti, i really love your writes, you have a unique perspective on things which appeals to my logic. well done!

[patti]

thanks you very much for you kind words... I always look at life from outside the box mean while everyone else stay inside the box ... but that what makes us writers right? we look outside the box!