Love

how loves feels like inside a beating heart

The sun goes down the moon rises
Only to cast a shadow over two lovers
who share one shadow
who share one soul

I gave my lifeless heart to you
you gave it life a reason to beat again
to be alive again
My heart found a beat along side yours
our heart beat the same rhythm
When I hold you tight
They merge as one as they found their missing part

When I look into your eyes
I see the brightest star upon the sky
Your heart heals my broken purpose
Only to discover
Your smile gives me strength and hope for the future

As I wake up every morning
You are my first thought
You are my reason
You bring me joy in my darkest hour
As I know
Your smile, your eyes, your heart
It is a most delightful privilege to witness
such a rare beauty you posess

When you're gone
My heart bleeds and tears
As the other half has been ripped away
But my heart beats for hope
As one day our hearts will collide again
So I can hold you tight and protect you in my arms
To never let you go
Never let my heart bleed again
As you are the other half of my heart

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

It's very nice and very heartfelt poem...have this 97.9/100 :)
keep writing.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

A sincere yearning, a patient prayer, a agony of separation and diffusion in chequered union.
I feel the need in this garland of simple yet touching words that you have weaved on a string of a mental beam from your mind to mine.

[patti]

thank you very much, well sometimes I let my heart do all the writing

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes thats the way one can navigate with the mind ....while the heart writes..

[The Invisible Girl]

Very beautiful, heartfelt poem! :) Keep it up! 100/100

[patti]

thank you, I also have another poem that i wrote yesterday

[teardrop]

quite the emotional read.

[patti]

yes it is indeed, but what loves makes you feel

[Nick.B]

Interesting poem, love the emotions one has after reading this piece, this has everything from the feel of love to hate, anger, compassion...great job

[patti]

thank you, well love is mixure of feelings that goes inside you

[quinfinn]

isn't that feeling wonderful? so much vested in your partner that all the world seems made for you and everything is right in tune. ah, i remember those! there are some excellent lines in this poem, and it truly is a beautiful love song. well done!

[patti]

thanks you, that is my first poem i done, love is wonderful feeling but yeah it can be made into a amazing love song but i believe poems are even more beautiful

[quinfinn]

absolutely, nice first effort! don't stop till you drop....

[patti]

i will keep my eyes and heart open to inspiration and i also write stories as well

[quinfinn]

very good, keep the faith in yourself and your own abilities