Deathly Disease

Deathly Disease

A Poem by pastelroses
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This is about being angry and letting the anger take over.

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You're a dangerous disease

Deceitfully, destroying

My silky shell,

Savagely suffocating

My lightly lit- lungs.


You're a mediocre monster

Sinfully searing

My fresh flesh

With your wretched words

 Of watered-down wisdom

Wishfully wanting


Your viscous victory

You're a carbonated cigarette,

Painfully poisoning,

My lemon lips

leniently lusting,

For one simple blow


You're a blistered bomb

Beautifully burning,

My hollow heart

Frantically freeing

My sugar soul,

From the dangerous disease

The mediocre monster,

The carbonated cigarette,

And the

Blistered bomb.

© 2015 pastelroses


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nice expressions you have used there...

Posted 7 Years Ago


We have all let the genie out the bottle at some time and regretted it. Its a frustrating life we lead these days and sometimes anxiety levels reach tipping point. It doesnt make them a bad person. We all have our own ways of keeping a lid on the simmering pot, but sometimes it spills over.
Some great word play here and I love thst you call it a poison, as that it surely is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


pastelroses

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review. It means a lot. Thank you for reading!
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on December 11, 2015
Last Updated on December 11, 2015
Tags: anger, hurt, pain