a little respite

a little respite

A Poem by a pas-tel tin/ted sur_reality
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i really love the concept of strumming a guitar while looking over a beautiful scenery and only being able to cry for your loved one

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i sit out on a balcony, overlooking a sparkling river that has carved its way through hills
the guitar in my hands sorrowfully cries
i look up to the sky
a bright, open, free sky that i have never seen before
i feel tears as sparkling as that river gather behind my eyes
i lower my head, letting out a quiet cry
i live in a free world in which my happiness is not certain, but everyone else's is
and i am happy for that, i have given so much for the happiness of others
but there's a dark cloud hanging over my heart, one made of selfishness and greed
i hate to admit it, but i need you by my side
i need to hold you, and i need to see you smiling
and not a fake smile, constructed into a mask that you've hiden behind for years
a real smile, a smile that betrays your supposedly "cold" eyes
i've never looked into your eyes with anything other than admiration and love
i strum my guitar

© 2015 a pas-tel tin/ted sur_reality


Author's Note

a pas-tel tin/ted sur_reality
i will admit this originated from a fanfiction but some thoughts really speak to you and make your chest want to burst and i think thats a wonderful feeling and it makes me worry that no other feeling will be as good but then i remember that moving moments are always coming along

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This is very good. It reminded me of my friend, which shows you how touching your poem is. If it can generate memories, it is wonderful. It is nice to have a "hopeless romantic" every once in a while to bring your spirits up. Keep up the good work! You're great at it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


a pas-tel tin/ted sur_reality

9 Years Ago

wow thanks seriously that means a whole lot to me :D
Gorgeous work - nothing wrong with it originating from a fanfic. I really enjoyed reading this, it moved me a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

I'd say anyone who plays an instrument or sings is a musician in their own right - some are just les.. read more
a pas-tel tin/ted sur_reality

9 Years Ago

i have written songs before, actually! mostly just for fun, though, like i've used rough translation.. read more
Brenda Woods

9 Years Ago

Oh, that's cool! Sounds fun, translating japanese lyrics :) Maybe I'll give it a go some time.
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Added on April 12, 2015
Last Updated on April 12, 2015
Tags: emotional, passionate