Wrong

Pulses of axiety.

Fear littering every movement.

The thoughts spread from my brain.

Seeping through my veins.

Pushing it within my lungs.

Something so wrong should never feel so good.

But trust me youll be my greatest mistake..

The one I'll never regret.

Should I apoligize for falling in love?

Does it matter if were not the opposite sex?

To some yes.

To me never...

 

Reviews

[Rose Kavanagh]

A well-written poem with a great message. I've never been in this situation, but you illustrated the fears and anxieties so well I like I can understand how it would feel. Wonderful work! :)

[J.M]

Interesting topic and one that many people are too sty to write about. But i think you expressed the inner turmoil extremely well. Good job!

[Ralphy]

Oh my, you know that in life there is only one thing that matters and that is the ability to have your own individuality. This one makes us whole, gives us life, and fills our direction is the correct path. Who you love is a sacred bond between you and them.
No one can govern your happiness for only you know what makes you happy…so what others think, whether they feel they are right or wrong, is yours decision.
I like to read poems that are expressive towards self worth for it help others and me to see what life is truly about…hugs Ralphy