I miss the old you...

I miss the old you...

A Poem by We are young.
"

To me ex- sisrendousin...

"

Memmories.

They will always cut like sharpened glass to the skin.

Like when a heart shatters.

Or ones eyes close shut for the final time.

 

Ducks, drinks of diet coke.

Happy, laughter

the sound of hope.

 

I was you're home skillet.

You're duck.

you're sisrendousin.

 

We made bob

and gomo

and Charlie.

 

We talked about the fututure.

It use to be so bright.

 

Now it's all gone.

Nothings alright.

 

You were my light in the dark.

The person I depeneded on

The person I clung to.

I'm thankful you were there.

For as long as you were.

Because at one point in my life you meant everything to me.

 

An understatement to say that I miss you.

But I miss YOU.

Not who you are now...

 

I miss the friend who didn't care if I was clingy.

Who cared when I cried.

Who cared when something was wrong.

thats not you.

 

I don't know if I'll take this well.

Or how long I'll think about you.

I wish you hadn't been like this though.

Showed me how wonderful, fantastic, and amazing friendship was.

Then let me down and really show me

That friends cant last forever.

and people change for the worst.

and it doesn't matter how hard you try.

People leave.

and they don't care

and they wont come back.

 

I'll still worry about you.

that much is for sure.

But if you really think, that this is best.

Ill agree.

I don't give a f**k anymore.

© 2010 We are young.


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There is such a heavy sadness here.. life moving on... friendship fallen through the cracks.. the pain.. the loss... You take us into the past and show us what friendship is supposed to be like, and into the now where it seemed to melt away... so sad...

Posted 14 Years Ago


"An understatement is to say I miss you.
But I miss YOU.
Not who you are now..." I really liked that line. Very Saddening.
It's very good, you just have a few grammar errors. Memmories should be Memories. You're should be Your. Nothings should be Nothing's. Depeneded should be depended. Fututure should be future, unless it was meant to be like that. And you forgot a few apostrophes.
Other than that, well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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